Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

Puzzle of Life

We struggle to fit in 
All of our broken pieces
Hidden behind our smiles
Into this puzzle of life
The soft curves of our hearts
Soothing the sharp edges of pain!

24.5.2021
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Contest: Bite size Poem 2
Third Place

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Kim Merryman May 30, 2021 at 6:52 PM I like this, Carol! Great images! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Carol Mitra May 30, 2021 at 7:18 PM Thanks dear Kim....much love :)

Gary Smith May 30, 2021 at 1:05 AM Excellent Carol, congrats. :) Carol Mitra May 30, 2021 at 3:00 AM Thanks Gary :)

Sam Kauffman May 29, 2021 at 11:22 AM This is wonderful Carol. I love the parallelism of the verses and your great, unique imagery! Congrats on a well deserved win! Blessings :D Carol Mitra May 29, 2021 at 10:48 PM Thanks dear Sam...I am glad you liked it....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith May 29, 2021 at 9:10 AM Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "Into this puzzle of life." So True. Have a blessed day................ Carol Mitra May 29, 2021 at 10:47 PM Thanks dear Paula....much love :)

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2021 at 8:45 AM outstanding reflection on life. Congrats for the win, Carol. Carol Mitra May 29, 2021 at 10:47 PM Thanks dear Andrea....much love :)

Tom Cunningham May 24, 2021 at 1:22 AM A lot of wisdom in a few lines Carol, best of luck in the contest and hope you have a great week. Tom Carol Mitra May 24, 2021 at 1:55 AM Thanks dear Tom...much love.