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Puzzle

What made her go this far? What drove her to this place? Her words are incoherent The answers etched across her face. Her eyes are sad and empty With a lifetime of regret, Doing everything in her power To make herself forget. Life has lost its meaning, But was there any there to start? The sole evidence of existence Is her rapidly beating heart. Plagued by self destruction: Oblivion equals bliss. Escape from all emotion It couldn’t have always been like this. Trying to place the pieces Of a picture that is unknown Searching for the demons That won’t let themselves be shown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2009 10:52:00 AM
My Charlotte, i am thoroughly enjoying your poetry>>James
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:00:00 AM
Thought it beautifully rhymes... pls add a closing para. illustrating: But to search for the angels who know... deprives a broken soul some sorrow.... trying to place few new pieces... reflects images' visage bits of happiness. Then re-entry proudly... this is in order to overcome angels over demons. I wish you all the best.
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Date: 4/2/2009 1:47:00 PM
rightly titled and observant. well rhymed also.John H Loving III
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Date: 2/22/2009 1:27:00 PM
Charlotte...I really like your dark and poignant reflections. Righton, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 2/20/2009 7:17:00 PM
This is so sad a good write,God Bless,Marie
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