Puzzle

What made her go this far?
What drove her to this place?
Her words are incoherent
The answers etched across her face.

Her eyes are sad and empty
With a lifetime of regret,
Doing everything in her power
To make herself forget.

Life has lost its meaning,
But was there any there to start?
The sole evidence of existence
Is her rapidly beating heart.

Plagued by self destruction:
Oblivion equals bliss.
Escape from all emotion
It couldn’t have always been like this.

Trying to place the pieces
Of a picture that is unknown
Searching for the demons
That won’t let themselves be shown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 10:52 AM
My Charlotte, i am thoroughly enjoying your poetry>>James
Shahwan Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Thought it beautifully rhymes... pls add a closing para. illustrating: But to search for the angels who know... deprives a broken soul some sorrow.... trying to place few new pieces... reflects images' visage bits of happiness. Then re-entry proudly... this is in order to overcome angels over demons. I wish you all the best.
Loving Iii Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 1:47 PM
rightly titled and observant. well rhymed also.John H Loving III
Voorhees Avatar
February 22, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Charlotte...I really like your dark and poignant reflections. Righton, Write on!! Steve
Prance Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 7:17 PM
This is so sad a good write,God Bless,Marie
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