Putting Together Parts

Now there's a puzzle

connecting the trivial,

what a house of cards...



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 1:56 PM
I really like this one, I think my life has many trivialites. So not the strongest house. heeheee
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Trivial pieces locked together. Interesting thought, Jay. In some respects, I feel like I live in a house of cards...maybe a world of cards waiting to collapse around me. Cool senryu! Love, Carolyn
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