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In a picture she looks young Beautiful caramel hair Green eyes that light-up and dance His love once romanced In a picture she looks old Shiny platinum blonde thin hair Green eyes that are now fatigued His love put away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 3:52:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on placing! I like what you did, felt sad but so true.
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Date: 12/8/2015 6:12:00 AM
Wow Sara a perfect one .. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:55:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:10:00 PM
Good write, Sara, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:21:00 AM
Wonderfully done, Sara. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:12:00 AM
Very well done, congratulations.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Sara.
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Date: 11/29/2015 6:20:00 PM
a heart felt write. LINDA
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Date: 11/29/2015 6:02:00 PM
oh yes, this sure does happen as we age. It's great to be back reading your poetry, Sara. I hope you had an enjoyable week.
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Date: 11/29/2015 2:16:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/28/2015 4:18:00 PM
- Beautiful, Sara - (I do not know Dodoitsu form) - However, you always very skilfully :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:45:00 AM
So beautifully created in this form, Sara. Sad evolution of youth and love. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautifully written.
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