Sara Kendrick Poet Dodoitsu

Put Away

In a picture she looks young
Beautiful caramel hair
Green eyes that light-up and dance
His love once romanced

In a picture she looks old
Shiny platinum blonde thin hair
Green eyes that are now fatigued
His love put away  

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Funom Makama December 17, 2015 at 3:52 AM lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Susan Gentry December 8, 2015 at 11:42 PM Congrats on placing! I like what you did, felt sad but so true.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 8, 2015 at 6:12 AM Wow Sara a perfect one .. Congrats on big win!

Skat A December 7, 2015 at 12:55 PM Sara, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Eve Roper December 7, 2015 at 12:10 PM Good write, Sara, congratulations on your win!

Sandra Haight December 7, 2015 at 10:21 AM Wonderfully done, Sara. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2015 at 8:12 AM Very well done, congratulations.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 7, 2015 at 7:06 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Sara.

Poet Destroyer A November 29, 2015 at 6:20 PM a heart felt write. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2015 at 6:02 PM oh yes, this sure does happen as we age. It's great to be back reading your poetry, Sara. I hope you had an enjoyable week.

Ravi Sathasivam November 29, 2015 at 2:16 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2015 at 4:18 PM - Beautiful, Sara - (I do not know Dodoitsu form) - However, you always very skilfully :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight November 28, 2015 at 10:45 AM So beautifully created in this form, Sara. Sad evolution of youth and love. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

DM Babbit November 28, 2015 at 10:04 AM Beautiful, just beautifully written.