Acrophobia

Pushed Back of the Ferris Wheel

Hold

on tight 

fighting a

wave of panic

suspended ; don't ever wanna go back

5/2/2019




Acrophobia 
Poetry Contest:'Dial It Back' 
Sponsored By:	Maureen McGreavy

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Andrea Dietrich

May 19, 2019 at 6:38 PM

excellent take on the theme, Eve. I really like your approach!

Kelly Deschler

May 10, 2019 at 6:14 PM

I actually do enjoy the thrill of a Ferris Wheel, but it does require a bit of courage for those first few minutes of the ride... Eve, you did a wonderful job of expressing those fearful feelings in this poem. Nice work! ... Good luck in the contest!

Jennifer Proxenos

May 4, 2019 at 9:00 AM

Hi Eve, I know the feeling well - I went on a roller coaster with my husband before we were married many years ago when you had no safety belts just a bar to hold onto and will certainly not repeat this experience ever again - when I read you poem it took me back to our roller coaster ride! Well penned Eve and good luck. Best wishes and hugs my friend, Jennifer.