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Oops, they pushed their captain off his own ship, made sure the deck was slick, black-boot polished, waited ‘til great white sharks surrounded it, until sharp sword swells upended its whip. They turned their back, mocked, laughed, pretending to be very serious - glasses pinch nose. They swabbed the deck whitewashing its bleak sin. OvErThRoW overthrow, not noticing a tidal wave is coming — a rogue wave ripping and roaring, exploring — the bore soaring, sore like Noah’s flood overdone, as the fallen angels drink from its cup. 12/4/2019

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Date: 12/5/2019 4:41:00 AM
Oh, my goodness! Kim there is a bit of viciousness inside your lovely mind. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 4:59:00 AM
LOL...thanks, my friend!
Date: 12/5/2019 3:36:00 AM
Is the ship the planet earth i wonder, excellent read, the poem, so meaningful,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2019 5:00:00 AM
Just might be, Harry! Thanks for stopping by :)
Date: 12/4/2019 12:51:00 PM
Ahoy Kim, can ye toss me a line, these sharks look hangry. :) Very creative my friend, this was a joy to read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2019 1:55:00 PM
Aye ;) Thanks!

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