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Oh fantastic furry feline
So silent and still in slumber
White whiskers awaiting to wake
From dreams of docile dormice.

Mysterious and mesmerising moggy
Boundless beauty befalls you
Perfect plush paws and cutting claws
Bright beautiful eyes bestowed.

Oh valiant velvet cloaked vagabond
A spirit so wild and wilful
My love lies languishing in your heart
Come closer to comfort my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/28/2014 6:22:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/27/2014 4:15:00 PM
Great little poem and congratulations on being "Featured"... couldn't help but smile when I read this. Nice use of alliteration; I especially liked "mysterious and mesmerising moggy". Good write!
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:19:00 PM
Loved it Gillian, especially the creative title :) Ana
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Date: 5/25/2014 10:31:00 AM
Clever use of alliteration - great write!
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:03:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gillian :) - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gillian Hughes
Date: 5/5/2014 2:46:00 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for the warm welcome and for your kind words about my poem. I am only a beginner at poetry but I enjoy writing it. Take care, Gillian x
Date: 4/29/2014 2:38:00 PM
Gillian, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Gillian Hughes
Date: 5/5/2014 2:49:00 PM
Hello Skat, thank you for the lovely welcome to Poetry Soup. I am just a beginner at poetry writing but I do enjoy it very much. I live in North Wales with my husband and seven cats. Take care, Gillian
Date: 4/27/2014 2:45:00 AM
Gillian, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: you're new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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Gillian Hughes
Date: 5/5/2014 2:51:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for the warm welcome and for inviting to enter your contest, I have entered one of my poems. Take care, Gillian