Black Eyed Susan Poet Couplet

Purrfect Answer

Why do you want me to take you back,
If I neglected you and favored the cat?

Why are you down on your knees, in tears?
Hey there goes Fluffy. Here kitty kitty, come here.

Oh what a good kitty you are. Do you want your ears scratched?
Does that feel good? Wait. What was that question she asked?

Hey. Where did she go? Did she get up and leave?
Ah well. Let’s go get you some tuna to eat!


10/10/11

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Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2012 at 10:46 AM HEy, WAY to GO in the contest. A big number one for you. GREAT job, my friend!!

Carol Eastman December 8, 2012 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on this fun poem.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 8, 2012 at 5:52 AM Big Congratulations on top spot Susan love xx

Joseph May December 8, 2012 at 5:01 AM congrats on your win Susan

Connie Gildersleeve December 8, 2012 at 3:47 AM Congrats on your winning poem a great write. Warm smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2012 at 3:16 AM Congratulations on your winning poem - thanks for the nice contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Melani Udaeta December 7, 2012 at 9:39 PM Purrrfrct Poem >^^<

Rollo West December 7, 2012 at 9:05 PM Hi Susan, congrats on your win, what a great write. Rollo

Poet Destroyer A December 7, 2012 at 8:45 PM HOLA my friend Susan, hope you are well... another wonderful win....love this ... and the ending is awesome....pd

Skat A December 7, 2012 at 6:59 PM thanks 4 the support~LUV~SKAT

Tony Lane October 13, 2011 at 1:22 PM This is very funny Susan, well done. thank you for your kind comments on my Mom's purse poem. Tony

Bl Devnath October 13, 2011 at 1:18 PM Witty and kitty both are nice here my friend. Lovely expression. Thanks for sharing and your comment on my poem. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM strongly presented in witty way Susan... sometimes we have to look past the hurts and scars and focus on 'kitty' only to survive.. this is why we luv pets so much.. awesome one.. luv..

Matthew Anish October 12, 2011 at 5:49 PM Reminds me of my late cat Bilbo. I miss her. You capture the essence of having a cat quite well in your ode. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Prince Ekpemandu October 12, 2011 at 2:33 PM very interesting

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2011 at 12:33 PM Cute..Creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2011 at 3:44 PM heehee, you are so good at this kind of cleverness!!

John Smith October 10, 2011 at 9:47 PM deftly skewers; neatly writ.

Russell Sivey October 10, 2011 at 7:05 PM Hilarious Susan!! I really enjoyed this poem as you took an unexpected angle to it! I love cats so I really liked this write!! Great job!!

Jl Sadberry October 10, 2011 at 6:29 PM Smile, *^_^* “Meow, Meow, Meow Meow!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

Nette Onclaud October 10, 2011 at 6:19 PM SOUP MAIL!