Purr

take me for a test drive
look under my hood
tinker with my engine
I still run good

look at my smooth chassis
investigate my dash
I can get you there
and do it pretty fast

investigate deeper
don't do it just for fun
I have a few dings
but I purr when I run
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 6, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Yep, draw your own conclusion- great poem! Enjoyed it very much.
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March 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM
very nice very nice loved it faleshia
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March 5, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Great write that leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions. Sara
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