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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Purples

Purples



First Rays,
on horizon,
Mesmerising purples,
that radiate and scintillate,
Treasure !!






Written Jan 19th, 2015
On Visual 6
For Andrea's contest

Awarded HM

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2015

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June 18, 2015 at 10:10 PM

This is a very pretty poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

June 12, 2015 at 4:58 AM

Very nice for sentiment... I would have liked all lines to have begun with a capital letter, though, as the effect in a short poem is disconcerting as you have it.

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 25, 2015 at 5:41 AM

Very nice pen Dr.Upma! I truly enjoyed your purples cinquain piece. Congrats on winning this contest awhile ago. A 7! Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light! God bless you! :) Love n' hugs! xxx D.

February 1, 2015 at 2:34 PM

DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 28, 2015 at 7:45 AM

Congratulations, Dr Sharma! You painted a beautiful, purple sky...hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2015 at 4:29 PM

Congrats for your win in my contest. You chose one of the very prettiest of the pictures.

January 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM

congrats on your win Dr Upma

Richard Lamoureux

January 25, 2015 at 3:48 PM

I am impressed with this piece, one of my personal favorites for the contest.

January 25, 2015 at 2:56 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

January 25, 2015 at 2:40 PM

One of my favorites of the contest. Congrats Dr Sharma.

January 23, 2015 at 1:50 AM

Purple is one of my favorite colors and you've captured it beautifully here. I really enjoyed this lovely write, Dr. Upma! Good luck in the contest!

January 20, 2015 at 12:46 PM

You sure paint a beautiful vista in your words Dr. Upma, very nice indeed, James :)

January 20, 2015 at 12:46 PM

I gave this a '7' because I no sooner read it, than I could see that beautiful, purple sky.

January 19, 2015 at 3:25 PM

Such beautiful imagery Dr Sharma - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

January 19, 2015 at 2:07 PM

nicely done most poems about the first or last rays very seldom mention purple..yet it is always there

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