Purple Lights Over the Shire

Let's watch purple 
           lights 
              as they pass their
way over the land
    Let's see a purple 
dawn
    Let's move down roads 
as yet unknown 
     to man 
we can dance
upon the moving 
waters
        the sky is 
ominous 
       black riders above 
let's dance down 
        the path of time
We will have
A revelation 
      When we see
the Misty Mountains
    When we watch 
our dawns
         change into 
sparkling elven nights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:57 AM
BEAUTIFUL! Matthew. Love, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Quite vivid, had a vision of light passing over the land! God Bless, Moses
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July 18, 2009 at 4:45 PM
Good use of imagery for interesting reading. The short lines work well. Good one! Karen
Buys Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Such a lovely and imaginative poem. Makes the imagination take flight. Very well done. Regards Heidie
Devonshire Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 12:54 PM
Beautiful images and a great sense of joy in this lovely poem, Matthew. It provided a much-needed lift for me today! Love, Carolyn
Rider Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 12:23 PM
This put me in mind of the Lord of the Rings, wonderful images! Very well written, Matthew..I like it alot. ~Trudy~
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