Purple Finch

crimson lilts of joy
fill the alder tree with song~
concert of rubies

03/14/22
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Maverick Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 10:11 PM
A glowing burst of descriptive red led colour Here no fear Jimbo.'
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 6:53 AM
charming ~
Ashley Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Dear James, I love purple finches and I adore your wonderful Haiku. You capture their delicate beauty with vibrant imagery.. especially the potent last line.. such vivid artistic expression! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:55 AM
Congrats. Filled with so much color and vibration , I loved it Jim :)
Goff Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:44 AM
Trees around Ma's apt host a giant flock every season Vie, quite delightful! fun poem to ink!
Deschler Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 10:07 AM
A very pretty poem! And, an interesting choice of bird for this contest. Well done, James! Congratulations on your win!
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:09 PM
Great imagery, James, congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:00 PM
i knew THIS one would score high. BIG congrats to you.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations, James! Filled with joy and color!
Callus Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Beautiful imagery, James, and the end line stands out! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Goff Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
Calasibetta Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest! So delightful! :)Paulette
Goff Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Thanks Paulette!
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
Goff Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 6:35 AM
Thank you Sara!
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:04 PM
Congratulations on you win, James. Reading this brought a thrill of delight. It is in my faves. :)
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:23 PM
Made my day Evelyn! Thank you!
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:19 PM
Great one with beautiful image. Congratulations!
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Christuraj!
Kitchin Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 4:17 PM
James congratulations on your first place win, a gorgeous haiku!
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Thanks Tania!
Rose  Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 4:15 PM
lol you make me want to pick up the paint brush and paint them, just as I see them after reading this, :) nice work Jim
Goff Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Vie!
Romios Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Totally beautiful thank you: Pangie
Goff Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Pangie!
George Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 8:55 PM
This is truly lovely, James ! Beautiful concert ! Once I had two finches ! I loved them !
Goff Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Cool! Thanks Valsa!
Horne Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 9:10 AM
oh, this is beautiful, my friend
Goff Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Jack!
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Ahhh!! I like this one. We have the purple house finches here who love the braces to the porch post. I enjoy watching them all spring. I am glad that I chose this one to read today. Sara
Goff Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Sara!
Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 11:22 PM
Lovely poetry Jim.
Goff Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Thanks Harry, fun to ink!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 8:22 PM
Pretty!
Goff Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Kim!
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 4:16 PM
oh wow, fantastic imagery. one of my favorite haiku I have seen recently
Goff Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Truly a lovely vision of song from a beautiful bird. Enchanting! All the best for the contest.
Goff Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Sam!
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