Purple Dreams In Other Realms

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Written on April 18th 2025 for Mystic Rose Rose's Purple Dreams In Other Realms Poetry Contest

Once upon a magical evening an enchanted fairy I happened to see dressed in a fantastical dress with two dappled wings of lace, ~Mystic Rose Rose she shone like the midnight sun; I must confess, she looked rather whimsical sitting there by a green wooden door, waiting for your lore ! ~Mystic Rose Rose Opalescent primroses wrap around the transcendental portal. Shimmering dragonflies swoop by, Inviting you to explore. Like glitter, endless stars adorn the sky. Magic reverberates off a lustrous golden handle, Turning it ever so slightly. A blinding white light shines through; Childish laughter fills the atmosphere. A rush of scintillating tiny fae buzzes by, Releasing a trail of silvery diamond dust behind. The scent of fresh summer nights invokes nirvana In this mystical wonderland, Nestled neatly in trunks of hawthorn trees.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/19/2025 9:09:00 AM

Dear Sara, I adore the fantastic whimsy of your poetic pen that captivated my imagination to explore a magical, mystical world beyond the "transcendental portal". I enjoyed the atmosphere where "Magic reverberates off a lustrous golden handle, turning it ever so slightly" beckoning me forward from a realm I know into an unknown place where joy and innocence reigns. There is enchanted bliss to be found "Nestled neatly in trunks of hawthorn trees." Such a splendid finale to a beautiful poem! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Ink Empress

Date: 4/19/2025 6:20:00 AM

Grumpy, you can write in any genre, you are so versatile, and that can be seen from this poem too, how youv written such a whimsical vibe to your word weaving which flows so well with mystic rose lines is beyond impressive and dreamy too! And has that storytelling vibe to it! I especially love the nirvana line! I used nirvana in my poem for her previous contest but had to change that cus i couldnt find a perfect rhyme for it lol! Youv nailed it! Best wishes! Sending you light always!