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The silence stills... the smile stays the energy of love enhanced. God's very own her sunshine rays shine heavy on her own romanced, She's leading us to reach us each gifting with love and wrapping tight her own gifts that done did beseech passed ego's lay and own will's fight. She hold presents for all to see, and truly loves to make you wait, but keeps them wrapped for us to be well learned in patience that does bait, anticipation in God's love and joy in timing God's request will have you looking up above, joy waiting with your very best.

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Date: 12/30/2009 12:17:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments oday Richard.Rgds Brian.A standard couplet ie as in the sonnets is 10 syllables and rhymes,but within that overall prosody the euphony is perhaps of more import than the number of syllables.Thanks for your interest in my poetry endeavours
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:48:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Richard. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 12:23:00 PM
Interesting write. Sara
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