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7/16/2024 for Alexandrine: In the 6th-12th Zone Poetry Contest sponsored by Hilo Poet

Natural The party was well planned. Fun and games would be had. Mom spent many long days making candy goodies for bro's special day. Finally, the day came. Outside, my brother's friends ran and played party games. Inside the playhouse, sat Lifesaver works of art. The candies looked so cute. Some looked like little boats. Others just like wee planes. For, when the big boys' games would end, they would partake in Lifesavers and cake. Yet, the plans would be spoiled, as the wee boy's tum filled with candies that were hid in a playhouse, by mom. The boy, to avoid harm, mutely left the crime scene. Caught by a mom too smart, would she cut out his heart? Visual The party was well planned. Fun and games would be had. Mom spent many long days making candy goodies for my bro's special day. Finally, the day came. Outside, my brother's friends ran and played party games. Inside the playhouse, sat Lifesaver works of art. The candies looked so cute. Some were like little boats. Others just like wee planes. For when the big boys' games would end, they would partake in Lifesavers and cake. Yet, the plans would be spoiled, as a wee boy's tum filled with candies that were hid in a playhouse, by mom. The boy, to avoid harm, mutely left the crime scene. Caught by a mom too smart, Would she cut out his heart? 

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Date: 12/12/2024 7:19:00 PM
My sincere compliments on your well earned placement, and for your participation, Crandall, my friend. Aloha~William.
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David Crandall
Date: 12/12/2024 7:54:00 PM
Thanks William. I enjoyed your contest!

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