Purist Pain

Look through the "windows" of my soul..
See their "pain" as it takes its toll.

My heart beats with each tear dropped.
Try as I may they cannot be stopped.

Hoping one day my heart will be filled; with you again.
With the purist of love, that we once had; until the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dawood Avatar
October 18, 2008 at 12:57 AM
I am so sorry for you. I experienced loss in the form of both my husband and my baby daughter within a space of 3 months in 1999. Please hang in there! Peace Fathima
Richards Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 5:44 PM
I hope the pain goes away. You have a kind soul, and I hope the tears end soon. ! Carrie
Torres Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 2:26 PM
Your like the rest of us Erin trying to make ends meet. God bless you I really enjoy your poems .. I pray that you prosper please keep writing your an excellent writer. kGod bless you michael.
Torres Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 2:25 PM
Erin Im so sorry to think you are a man. Please forgive my ignorance. I know a man that believe it or not spells his name like you instead of Aaron. I dont know why but its like the name Renee for female and Rene' for male. I take it that you are a widow from this writing but it might be another tyoe of relation. It was an excellent write very touching. I read your poems and read the ones about your bills i would recommend you get a blog so we can see you and you can receive comments but I know.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 1:24 PM
Sweet write. God Bless. Vince
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