Purgatory Perhaps

grimaces around me
there is no light here
smog erupts through my visible soul
I have yet to realize my location
brain and heart are no longer with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lokken Avatar
October 7, 2008 at 11:47 AM
I don't really see how this is a 'cute' poem or one not original because it has original emotion to it---and we all really write on often a same subject but with different perspectives....we all do, it seems to me. And we probably should respect those differences in each other...
Anymore Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 1:26 PM
Cute, but it's not that original
Lokken Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 8:52 AM
People can never be allowed to define your light. Don't let others take it away...or they've won. Best wishes, Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace