Purgatory

holding onto illusion
trying to make it through.
a broken shard of glass
that cuts you into two
fevered dreams reflect fantasies
scattered threads permeate reality
round and down
circles through the mind
lost and bound in purgatory 
condemned to reside

this state of delusion
a symptom of confusion
called to the void
dragged down into hell
silent despair
only broke by quiet prayer
seeking salvation
hand of god
ultimate exaltation from above
supreme exhilaration
conveyed in shame
the original sin
impossible to tame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:02 PM
"scattered threads permeate reality" You write some truly memorable lines. I also really like "condemned to reside." Interesting wrap up at the end. Always, Laura
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January 24, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Absolutely perfect...every single word.
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January 22, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Very deep and very well expressed... You write very well..
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January 22, 2018 at 10:58 AM
I like this write of yours Frederick, LINDA
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