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Pure Waters Flow

Vast waters covered in glowing heavenly hue. Breaking clouds leak love. *For Raul Moneros' Contest, Champagne Skies*

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2010 10:49:00 PM

Okay Gareth your last round is in. Do not forget to leave a comment.

Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 1:41:00 PM

Congrats James- knew it when I saw this one

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:10:00 AM

Beautiful entry, Gareth. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 3:44:00 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2010 11:16:00 PM

I do know what haikus are you are right. I do not need to take a quiz . To admitt this one is good. Good luck on the contest. Or did you win already . little humor on the winning part. wait a minute . You and a couple of others are good at humor..I posted the poem when I got out of work today . Ready for round three . or quit when you want to.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2010 5:48:00 PM

I am always amazed how each person perceives these photos. Your's is a unique and wonderful inspiration...great job, Gareth! Love, Carrie

Date: 3/28/2010 1:07:00 PM

Interesting perspective on the picture for readers to enjoy. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:22:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in this contest...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/28/2010 8:48:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:30:00 AM

Gareth, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > kool Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 6:56:00 AM

Another big congrats Gareth for your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. an excellent Haiku and vivid description in your lines and a well earned trip to the winners circle..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Gareth. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 1:02:00 AM

Gareth, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

John Freeman

Date: 3/26/2010 7:27:00 PM

All the Haikus I've read for this contest are # 1 in my book Gareth. Including yours. Raul has some tough decisions ahead of him. But he's up to it I'm sure, Smile. Thanks for supporting my blog, I left a comment there for you. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 3/26/2010 3:13:00 PM

Wonderful words to a most beautiful picture, good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Gareth James

Date: 3/26/2010 1:16:00 PM

Thanks for your comments

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2010 9:54:00 AM

Very nicely done, Gareth. I Hope this does well in the contest! Hey, can you give me your birthdate so I may know all your numbers. I am doing a follow up numerology blog very soon and would really appreciate it. soup mail me or leave up at my third blog i did on numbers . Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/25/2010 6:03:00 AM

very nice, must be a winner

Mitch White

Date: 3/25/2010 4:24:00 AM

very nice Gareth gl in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2010 3:43:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara