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Pure Waters Flow

Vast waters covered

in glowing heavenly hue.

Breaking clouds leak love.



*For Raul Moneros' Contest, Champagne Skies*

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Poet Destroyer A

April 7, 2010 at 10:49 PM

Okay Gareth your last round is in. Do not forget to leave a comment.

Mitch White

March 30, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Congrats James- knew it when I saw this one

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:10 AM

Beautiful entry, Gareth. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

March 29, 2010 at 3:44 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

Poet Destroyer A

March 28, 2010 at 11:16 PM

I do know what haikus are you are right. I do not need to take a quiz . To admitt this one is good. Good luck on the contest. Or did you win already . little humor on the winning part. wait a minute . You and a couple of others are good at humor..I posted the poem when I got out of work today . Ready for round three . or quit when you want to.

Carrie Richards

March 28, 2010 at 5:48 PM

I am always amazed how each person perceives these photos. Your's is a unique and wonderful inspiration...great job, Gareth! Love, Carrie

March 28, 2010 at 1:07 PM

Interesting perspective on the picture for readers to enjoy. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Marty Owens

March 28, 2010 at 10:22 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in this contest...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

March 28, 2010 at 8:48 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

March 28, 2010 at 8:30 AM

Gareth, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest > kool Haiku >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 28, 2010 at 6:56 AM

Another big congrats Gareth for your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest.. an excellent Haiku and vivid description in your lines and a well earned trip to the winners circle..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 28, 2010 at 5:35 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Gareth. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

March 28, 2010 at 1:02 AM

Gareth, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

John Freeman

March 26, 2010 at 7:27 PM

All the Haikus I've read for this contest are # 1 in my book Gareth. Including yours. Raul has some tough decisions ahead of him. But he's up to it I'm sure, Smile. Thanks for supporting my blog, I left a comment there for you. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

March 26, 2010 at 3:13 PM

Wonderful words to a most beautiful picture, good luck in Raul's contest >> James

Gareth James

March 26, 2010 at 1:16 PM

Thanks for your comments

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2010 at 9:54 AM

Very nicely done, Gareth. I Hope this does well in the contest! Hey, can you give me your birthdate so I may know all your numbers. I am doing a follow up numerology blog very soon and would really appreciate it. soup mail me or leave up at my third blog i did on numbers . Luv, Andrea