Pure Vision- Form Lune - 3 Lines Contest

Form: Lune   5/3/5 words

children can look and see
only pure visions
which adult minds then defiles

penned 18/5/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 6:14 AM
That is true. Not many words, but it means so much. Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
Roberts Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 6:56 AM
thank you Casarah for taking the time to stop by and comment ....Seren
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