Pure Thoughts On Nature

PURE   THOUGHTS   ON   NATURE


Water moulds rock,  rock  resists :
There is no winner, no loser  at all.
Mother birds feed babies : this is amoral.
Neither bad nor good ; simply what exists.

Men are attracted to women  - that’s how it was meant;
Air is beautiful to breathe; water to drink;
Lions eat gazelles.   All this is amoral,  despite what we think.
Death comes to all in the end : not a moral event.

Poverty in the midst of plenty doesn’t exist in nature;
Such  things are not natural : are immoral.
They exist only in man’s realm, as also all 
The  haters,  murderers, and  lusty debauchers. 

Turn away a beggar  - not enough money for your self?
Pure nature’s made impure by our weakness in the head.
Someone* said  “ A small bird will drop frozen dead 
From a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself.”

It is immoral to see orphans and not want to foster
The homeless, unloved, ignored, or despised.
We may think they are failures, while we are prized, 
But  triumph and disaster are unnatural  imposters.  **

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NOTES

*       Actually,  the great novelist and poet D. H. Lawrence

**     From  R.  Kipling’s poem    “ IF ”
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Entered in John Freeman’s  Contest  “Pure Thoughts On Nature”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Congrats on your super win..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!A wonderful poem.---Lori
Freeman Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Sydney, My man, Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Poetess Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win Syd. Great write on what is moral and immoral. Love, Glenna
Guzzi Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Such a sterling write very true and very provacative. Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:47 PM
tops for you, syd... happy to share the spot with you; my rhymes workes too, told ay! lol.. cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Congrats on a super first place win in John's contest .. stunning..Syd...
Richards Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Deeply thoughtful, and with great wisdom, and insight. There is a lesson in all nature. Well done, Syd!!
Beck Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Thanks a lot for your kind words Carrie...I cannot claim to be full of wisdom....it simply seems like common sense to me... best wishes Syd
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Syd. It was a pleasure to read and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 12:57 PM
A profound write here...enjoyed.Best wishes.
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