Pure Rot

Some days are winners, others are not The jury's still out but seems today's gone to pot My mood's in the dumper My world's split asunder We've run out of java, my day is pure rot © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/20/2015 8:06:00 PM

I'm more of a tea person, though I suppose I can understand! Nice one here! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/20/2015 8:30:00 PM

Gotta have that first sip of java every morning or I can't function... addicted? Maybe!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/10/2015 11:35:00 AM

Rot Gut? Oh my!... I'm sure Lady Cathie would be willing to take you to a Starbucks... Just ask... I'd take you but it would be Monday by the time I got there to do it... Longer if I have to dig thru your snow... Just kidding! Smile! We had tornados run past our house last night... Fortunately, we had no damage... and we're still smiling. Tho the Creve Coeur Airport with the vintage air planes got hit big time... Hubby will be crying over that for a long time to come...

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/10/2015 1:58:00 PM

We have Starbucks but Tim Horton's is Canada's coffee of choice!!!YIKES! Tornadoes... s-c-a-r-y! xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/10/2015 2:10:00 AM

Humour is still alive wid u my dear friend Jack ! God bless ur writings n you !

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/10/2015 6:30:00 AM

Morning coffee saves lives!!! Hugs, Jackles xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:34:00 PM

LOVE this one, Jack. Keep 'em coming

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/10/2015 6:31:00 AM

No sign of them stopping! LOL Thank you dear Andrea! Loving hugs, Jackles xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/9/2015 9:03:00 AM

Oh no....call the corner store and have the boy deliver it on his bike.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2015 9:08:00 AM

Ooops sorry Timothy! Didn't think of that... you have all the answers my friend! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/9/2015 9:03:00 AM

You is in fine form today, Mr. Wulf... very entertaining! At this very moment, I'm attending a lecture at JA! (Javaholics Anonymous) So when can I expect you with a cup of that life saving stuff?