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Pure Perfection

The crystallised splish splash of hope.
Of all my hopes.
Each drop a prism that frames you
In a thousand miniature rainbows.

An image so perfect
That only the pure combination
Of nature and you
Could ever create it.

Darkening blonde hair blown directionless
In the sea breeze.
Then matted, till movement becomes impossible
By the sun reflecting blue.

A tranquil moment of all my love, joy and dreams 
Rolled into the rising of two mouth corners 
In one all encompassing moment
Of pure perfection.

What else is there to aspire to?
When I could never be as proud of anything that I achieve
As I am in this moment
Of unquantifiable bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/5/2010 8:16:00 PM
I really like the opening line in this poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Paul. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:40:00 AM
Paul, Your words here invite thought. I especially love the first stanza ...prisim...thousand miniature rainbows Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:32:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely!
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Date: 6/4/2009 6:08:00 AM
Wow wow wow! A most beautiful moment captured in time like a picture! Such an excellent write from your heart of hearts. Nice work. Thanks Paul for your very thoughtful congrats. Appreciate it so very much. Love, Shar
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