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Pure Mortal

Memories
Overtime
Remembered
Throughout 
After
Life

beautifullifelongingmagicacrostic

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Dorian Petersen Potter

March 25, 2015 at 2:49 AM

Very nice pen Gerald! Enjoyed your acrostic piece, dear friend. Enjoyed!A 7 from me! Thanks for sharing. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.

Jaycee Cervenka

March 23, 2015 at 7:13 PM

I love to do acrostics and this one is very good. Sometimes one-word lines can feel very forced but this one just feels like a minimalist poem. It's worthy even if you do not notice the Acrostic.