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Pure Mortal

Memories Overtime Remembered Throughout After Life

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/25/2015 2:49:00 AM

Very nice pen Gerald! Enjoyed your acrostic piece, dear friend. Enjoyed!A 7 from me! Thanks for sharing. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/23/2015 7:13:00 PM

I love to do acrostics and this one is very good. Sometimes one-word lines can feel very forced but this one just feels like a minimalist poem. It's worthy even if you do not notice the Acrostic.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/23/2015 5:35:00 PM

great acrostic Gerald:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jerry Swana
Date: 3/23/2015 5:58:00 PM

thank you thank you this was my first try at one your input means the world :)) <33