Pure Gold

A couple of months I'll be eighty-one years old This warm body of mine will soon start to feel cold Had a great life Not too much strife And this gorgeous specimen is still pure gold LOL

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/17/2016 8:24:00 PM

Pure gold indeed!!! Any plans on your birthday? Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/16/2016 8:03:00 AM

With a gorgeous bod like that I'm sure you'll make your way over gracefully, no tripsying for sure footed you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/17/2016 8:16:00 AM

Haven't tripsyed for many a year... to dangerous! LOL

Tim Smith

Date: 6/15/2016 2:27:00 PM

Just look at the ladies and you'll warm right up...you'll be running around like a spry young pup...licking some things...having a fling...going to the fountain of youth and filling your cup

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/16/2016 6:16:00 AM

You are a master of the limerick my friend! Love it! Cheers, the old guy!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2016 10:48:00 AM

Next stop Ninety! Your good as gold so your made to last! If you have a chance check out my "Thirsty" poem, I think you might enjoy it. Take care Golden Boy.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/16/2016 6:19:00 AM

Next stop Ninety????? Wowsers, you saying it sends shudders through this gorgeous body!!! LOL Will tripsy on over to check out your "Thirsty" poem!

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/15/2016 8:52:00 AM

Me Papa's turning 85... Still riding his Harley... Oh Me Oh My! Don't think he'll ever slow down a bit... The Doctors were just checking him out... and said he's perfect... As he gave them the slip... After all he's too busy to hang around with Doctors... Hey! What can I say... Wouldn't change a thing! PS his birthday is August 31st.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/15/2016 8:59:00 AM

Oops a misdirected reply! STILL RIDING HIS HARLEY!!!!!! My hero! August is my birthday too! Send cheers to the old duffer from me!!! xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/15/2016 8:52:00 AM

LOL You got it!!!