Pure Fun

Once upon a time of grand pleasure
There was a child with thoughts of pure fun
Days danced from one to another
How wonderful it felt to be young

To capture secret snow forts
on toboggans of imagination
To cross vast fishing streams
in the canoes of creation
To race through open fields
at the silent speed of light
To dig for buried treasure
and catch fireflies at night

Those places that we visited 
were at the heart of time and space
They may be gone at the present
Yet, they can never be erased

The ballgame in the corner lot
that spectacular catch you made
The birthday of your special gift
when all your wished were repaid

The years when certain music
was inspiring and brand new
When books became a vacation
getting lost with; "you know who."

Let's visit that time in the present
not retreat to the past
Let's do something that's pleasant
for life rushes by too fast

Now - is the time to discover
what a wonder life can be
Having pure fun with another
by releasing the child in; "me."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Yates Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 3:22 PM
Very nice! We all need to find our inner child at times and realize life is too short not to just have fun at times... Great write!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:00 AM
This was teriffic, Jack. It captures some of the emotion of being young. I guess as we get older, the nostalgia keeps becoming more important. A lot of my poems are about music back then and those times when family and neighbors were more important than status. God Bless. Vince
Winter Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 5:00 PM
Wow. Actually got chills at the end of this one. What a beautiful idea. Do you think we really could? What an awesome write with a brilliant message! Certainly has inspired me to try. Thank you! Love, Shar
Gorelick Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 11:56 AM
This is a very sweet sweet with an important message. Good job. BG
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