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Episode 1 Enter Fire Ball Can I help being curvaceous and bold, Or so I’ve been told, Can I help it, if I get a visual massage, Daily compliments, in fact a barrage! I was born a beauty, and to only preen Always to be seen as pristine! In fact I’m an absolute sensuous tease, Who flirts and sways as does a breeze, Can I help looking like a Hollywood star, Does all the above sound somewhat bizarre, Do I come from Planet Venus afar, Of course yes, I’m looking for my man from Mars, They say he’s behind bars, But I am a new superhero Who journeyed to Planet Earth from the age zero, My beauty computed to blind and bedazzle, Humans who try to stop me, fry to a frazzle, My name in comic books, if you know your stuff, Is Fire Ball, outrageously dangerous and tough, It was Planet Venus’s dream, Though somewhat extreme, That I turn every prison guards’ head, It was written, and is widely known and said, That I would come, to free my man from his hell, On Planet Earth’s cell, I have been mentored for this, since I was sweet sixteen, I’m magnificently exquisite, but bad and mean, My orders to free my hero and take him back to Mars, As he sits behind iron bars, His strength, has been seeped and taken away By humans, who will rue that fateful day!

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Date: 10/20/2019 11:29:00 AM
You know, this is most likely, exactly what would happen to a martian who visited earth. Well penned.
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Date: 11/16/2019 11:43:00 AM
Bingo, I think so too - but what would be the consequences? Thanks MLK for such an apt comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 10/5/2019 2:43:00 PM
A more than awesome pen.... Panagiota. oxox Your adopted grandson in in a baseball tournament in Reno.. 40 degrees this am, his team won 8-0! OPA
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/6/2019 4:15:00 AM
Thanks my friend - enjoyed writing it . Wow - a super sportsman grandson - you must be very proud, so am I. A BIG hug from me thanks for an awesome comment! Hugs, Jennifer
Date: 10/4/2019 3:35:00 PM
Episode 1 has me hooked, I hope Episode 2 is on the way!
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Date: 10/6/2019 1:31:00 AM
Episode 2 posted my friend. xxx
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/5/2019 1:55:00 AM
Look out for it later today Michelle I will be introducing a new superhero - I'm so happy that you and some others are getting hooked because I am going to continue with this story until I feel its end is nigh! Thank you my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 10/3/2019 10:42:00 PM
Wow! Jennifer, I enjoyed this from start to finish. If this is your imagery persona then we must be twins lol! In all seriousness your imagination soared in this write. Good rhymes as well. If there's a part 2 , I can't wait to read it :-) Alexis
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/5/2019 1:49:00 AM
Hi my kind and beautiful soul twin, Alexis - I'm so glad you enjoyed it because I have just completed getting episode 2 ready and will be posting it later today - tomorrow starting episode 3 - I am enjoying writing this poem/story. what a beautiful comment - thank-you! Love and hugs, Jenny.
Date: 10/3/2019 5:39:00 PM
You have given free rein to your imagination and fantasy, Jenny! The subject of this poem is a sensuous tease, but definitely not one to be underrated. Looking forward to episode 2. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/5/2019 1:42:00 AM
Hi Paul, thank-you for an awesome comment - yes I have ventured into deeper waters so to speak and have discovered that I really enjoy writing fantasy - episode 2 to be posted later today. Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 10/1/2019 4:54:00 AM
A twist here...you danced through this write...I like the vibes
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Date: 10/1/2019 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Arturo - had fun writing it - look our for Episode 2! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/30/2019 2:44:00 AM
- A superhero in action ... Usually she walks among us like a normal woman ... But occasionally she fights for justice :))) - A wonderful and funny poem, dear Jenny:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2019 1:26:00 PM
Felt like a writing a little futuristic, I'm glad you enjoyed it my dear friend and Sunshine Smile - it was great fun writing it. Yes they appear normal to us all, unless duty calls! Thank you for such a cute comment Anne-Lise, keep well and blessings and hugs always. Jenny.
Date: 9/29/2019 4:21:00 PM
Sister soul, you captivate my heart and you bring into it a huge smile! The power of your imagination is amazing! Inviting your avid reader to a planet you weave of so sweet and unique poetry! You are a beauty! So much pleased dear Jenny to read you! Definitely a FAV.. my warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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Date: 9/30/2019 1:21:00 PM
Besma my dearest friend I have missed you but I don't know if you have realized from some of my poems that we have sold our home which has been in the family for 50 years - it has seen three generations and the packing and packing and the crying and the ultime move in three weeks time has made me very sad indeed. Thank-you for your lovely and most welcome visit and as usual a brilliant comment - forgive me for not commenting on your awesome writes but will visit them and absorb them when I have a little more time tomorrow. Love, hugs and blessings always, Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 4:00:00 PM
Splendid imagination as always..you rule fantasy land my friend..I enjoyed reading your story..a talented write, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/29/2019 4:27:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Thank you Vijay that is a kind and wonderful comment - I enjoy writing fantasy stories, I lose myself in them, like Alice in Wonderland! Best wishes my friend and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 2:49:00 PM
But I thought that Women were from Venus, Men from Mars... Just teasing. Enjoyed this super-hero romp, Jennifer. Thanks, Gershon.
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Date: 10/6/2019 5:43:00 AM
Hi Gershon Episode 2 has been posted. Hugs, Jenny.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 4:23:00 PM
Imagine, you got me there for a moment! Thanks for a great comment Gershon and your continued support and friendship. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 12:30:00 PM
Our very own Poetry Soup super hero... I think this is one of your finest poems...both in subject, imagination and poetic words that rhyme and flow so well .
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 12:37:00 PM
Thank-you S.O coming from you, an amazing and talented poet, I feel truly honoured. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 10:07:00 AM
Very well crafted witty poem... your talent shines through ... this was a delightful read. Great penning :) hugs
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:33:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed Sandra - it was a fun write for me which transported me to a fantasy and hero dominated world. Thank-you for a wonderful comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 9:35:00 AM
Well written with great imagery. I could see her on the front cover of the comic book, all dressed in a tight fitting fire red costume. Well done Jennifer. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:30:00 PM
That is great news, thanks for this awesome comment Judy, feel good that you could visualize her, in fact I will use your description of her in my follow up episode(with your permission). Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 9/29/2019 6:18:00 AM
You are a beautiful selfless soul and amazingly great charming poetic friend...not to mention a remarkable poetess...if Bobby had another friend contest...you would be there before first lol...thank you for your friendship and heartwarming poetic comments Jenn...curvaceous! hey lol...wheres Bobby?...^WW^ {*_J*}
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:07:00 AM
I love this comment and have kept it as my fave - you make me blush with your kind compliments - thank-you ^WW^ for a beautiful poetic friendship - I value it dearly. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Date: 9/28/2019 11:52:00 PM
Fantasy and fiction... wonderful poem. You are very creative indeed. Bless you
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 8:03:00 AM
Thank-you Regina, so are you - a wonderful comment from a true poetess. Bless you too Regina, hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2019 8:45:00 PM
this is a marvelous poem, Jennifer, your muse never runs out.. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/29/2019 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve, when my muse gets lazy or bored, or has no original ideas, we fly a kite under the starlit night (as one of my previous poem about my muse says) then everything returns to normal - thanks for a great comment Eve, Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2019 8:35:00 PM
A joyful read Jennifer! Girls do love those bad boys don't they? Delightful! xxoo
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 7:55:00 AM
I guess they do Connie so glad you enjoyed my poem and Bobby is expecting part two, so I'll have to give episode 2 some thought. Thanks for your kind visit and comment! Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2019 8:23:00 PM
This is so fun, you had my attention from start to finish. Hugs Rick.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 7:52:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Rick, I also had fun writing it - my husband smiled when he read it, always says I seek and adventure 'superheroes now' he said! Thank-you for an awesome comment, Hugs and blessings Jen.
Date: 9/28/2019 3:51:00 PM
This is so cute Jennifer, you should start your own comic book call it: Jenfantsica lol I loved it when is part 2 coming out?
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:46:00 AM
Wow Bobby glad you liked it - Jenfantsica Huh? - never thought of part two but have to give it some thought to make it exciting! Thank you Bobby my friend a wonderful comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2019 2:45:00 PM
Straight out of a marvel comic book. A well written fantasy tale Jennifer .
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thank-you Tom - I love watching the superhero movies like the Hulk and Batman and Iron Man etc. Relaxes the mind to watch a bit of fantasy, plus you pick up ideas for poems. A real compliment that my poem is almost like being straight out of a marvel comic! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/28/2019 2:44:00 PM
A really great piece Jennifer, such an enjoyable ride running along on this real trailblazer. I wonder what it would be like getting a flight from between the planets! Makes one think! Blessings always,Gordon
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/29/2019 7:32:00 AM
Thank-you Gordon - A wonderful comment from a wonderful poet. In hundred years from now I think what you say in your comment will become a reality! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

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