Pure Enjoyment

Our bodies move together
As we both push for the same goal
The sweat on our bodies glistening
Our breathes 
Deep and heavy.
My moans echoing throughout the room
As you push your way deeper and deeper inside.
My nails digging into your back
This freedom of pure enjoyment.
We get closer and closer to the edge
Almost pushed into the blissful erotic state
The thrusting quicker
Deeper
Better. 
Our eyes connect
Explosive.
Our bodies wind down together
As we had both reached our climatic goal.
We regain out composure
And our bodies move together again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 30, 2008 at 4:49 PM
Round two? I love the last line because it gives the reader the impression that this about to continue again. You expressed yourself so well. Hope to get to know you and writing a lot better.
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