Pure Enchantment

Free-fancying through the woods upon lofty ribbons of airy trees, I tiptoe along a hidden pathway where glimmering reeds sing its myth-- that in late nightfall and its starry array my dream-like state becomes caressed by feathery, ethereal images in gauze wings. Clutching the soil until it reverberates with the tinder- box hymn ( or dance) of life, my being immerses in nature’s waters : where pixies flow in ageless twirls of creation. And to experience all as an inner odyssey, when the breath of pure spirit blows in wonderment gossamer flights lift my daze unto infinity-- inhaling that child-god universe beyond oneself, engrossed in a moment of enchanted play when glorious evening's stage bursts into a dream! Mystic Rose Contest: A LOVELY LITTLE DAYDREAM 1..21..2017
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Fantastic compositions. I like the metaphors and imagery. Well done! :)
Vinson Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Nette, I love your poems. You are sensitive to the unseen worlds around us. To be in the trees, to touch the earth - ahhhh.... : )
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Beautiful like always congratulations on your win Hugs
Gupta Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Beautiful images ... Congratulations on your win ...
Turner Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations nette on making yet another short list of winners. Beautifully done:)
Lawless Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:33 AM
the tickle of feathery, ethereal images.....well done Nette.
Nusker Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Such lovely descriptions. Congratulations!
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