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Pure Enchantment

Free-fancying through the woods upon lofty ribbons of airy trees, I tiptoe along a hidden pathway where glimmering reeds sing its myth-- that in late nightfall and its starry array my dream-like state becomes caressed by feathery, ethereal images in gauze wings. Clutching the soil until it reverberates with the tinder- box hymn ( or dance) of life, my being immerses in nature’s waters : where pixies flow in ageless twirls of creation. And to experience all as an inner odyssey, when the breath of pure spirit blows in wonderment gossamer flights lift my daze unto infinity-- inhaling that child-god universe beyond oneself, engrossed in a moment of enchanted play when glorious evening's stage bursts into a dream! Mystic Rose Contest: A LOVELY LITTLE DAYDREAM 1..21..2017

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Date: 1/28/2017 9:58:00 PM
Fantastic compositions. I like the metaphors and imagery. Well done! :)
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:01:00 PM
Nette, I love your poems. You are sensitive to the unseen worlds around us. To be in the trees, to touch the earth - ahhhh.... : )
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:27:00 PM
Beautiful like always congratulations on your win Hugs
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful images ... Congratulations on your win ...
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Date: 1/21/2017 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations nette on making yet another short list of winners. Beautifully done:)
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:33:00 AM
the tickle of feathery, ethereal images.....well done Nette.
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Date: 1/21/2017 6:17:00 AM
Such lovely descriptions. Congratulations!
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