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Pure Beauty - Carolyn Devonshire

Carolyn Devonshire’s angelic face.
Artful beauty my heart can not erase.
Ravishing grace bestowed mine eyes.
Optimum feelings in my heart rise.
Love at first sight you captured my heart.
Your smile enchanting my soul at the start.
Now and forever you will live in my heart. 

Dear Carolyn, I saw your little picture to the left 
of your comment to Chef’s blog . Your picture above 
your bio walking along the shore, barefoot blue jeans rolled 
to your calves and the top whoa a silhouette in the sun sitting 
on the water. This is my first poem but I have read all of Chef’s
Love poems . He once told me you do not need a pen to write
Poetry , you need heart .You have given me that heart. If I may
LOVE kenny

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Charmaine Chircop May 16, 2013 at 4:39 AM Carolyn is definitely a special poet and friend.I miss her so much..and the chef is a lovely sweet fella..Tnks for writing about them.

Elizabeth Wesley December 23, 2011 at 10:13 AM I agree with all you said, our Carolyn is certainly part of the lifeblood that flows on this site and your verse is such a sweet testimony to her! :) Merry Christmas to you!

Laura Breidenthal December 19, 2011 at 9:16 PM Adorable! :D Hehe And this is definably from the heart indeed. Always, Laura

Joyce Johnson December 17, 2011 at 10:55 PM Carolyn is a lovely lady. You have a good eye and instinct. Congratulations on your first two poems Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2011 at 10:09 PM A really sweet poem for this sweet lady! I hope you get inspired to add more poetry to your collection here!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 14, 2011 at 1:35 PM Hi Kenny :) Francine is really particular w/ her rules. She wants your name and the date. You do not need to rewrite it...only write the day you first wrote the poem (so not the day you typed it in). She just wants to make sure they are new. Just hit edit on "my poems" and you can easily add it. Also, put "a fledging poet" where your last name should go...that will make it show up like mine.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 13, 2011 at 9:50 PM Kenny I'm glad you chose Francine for your mentor...she is excellent! I look forward to seeing more of your poems Kenny :)

Tracy Edwards December 13, 2011 at 5:37 PM Aww this is lovely Kenny...Welcome to your qwn account on P.S.. have so much fun writing hun xxx

Carolyn Devonshire December 13, 2011 at 3:44 PM Dear Kenny, this is so sweet. You sure know how to sweep a lady off her feet. (Can you see me blushing?) Thank you and I hope you will continue writing on the Soup. Please give HG my best wishes for a full recovery. Love, Carolyn

Kenny A Fledgling Poet December 13, 2011 at 2:17 PM I m sorry ,i m stoned right now I'll talk to you later kenny

Francine Roberts December 13, 2011 at 2:13 PM you have soup mail Kenny

Lisa Cooper December 13, 2011 at 12:31 PM welcome Kenny, what a shining tribute to Carolyn.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 13, 2011 at 11:15 AM Welcome to your poetry Kenny. We all welcome you to PoetrySoup. Always write from your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. You did an excellent write for your first poem here at the soup and wrote it of a super duper poet. Thank you for sharing with us and continue to write you have the heart for it so to speak. Love and blessings always, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 13, 2011 at 10:41 AM This is so impressive Kenny! Carolyn is truly beautiful inside and out and I'm glad you wrote her this lovely poem. She will love it, I'm sure :)

Francine Roberts December 13, 2011 at 10:20 AM Yah !!! you have your own name on your work, Now you can write and write and we will all be happy to read and read. Looking forward to seeing much more of your work and watching you develop as a poet