Pure

Energy crackled, it danced in your heart
Start shackled, a pony show to start
Always heckled, danger to the part
Inside freckled, riddled with bad art
Unleashed, cackled, daggers to your heart
Freedom, tackled, killed you with mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 4, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Intriguing poem, Tim. Energy can be both good and bad. When someone uses it to hurt you, the "daggers to your heart" can be painful, at times even lethal. Thanks for stopping by Tim. Enjoyed reading your poem. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carolyn
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November 3, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Enjoyed reading your excellent work this afternoon..A very interesting poem..We can kill another's freedom if we use our freedom irresponsibly...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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