Pure

Energy crackled, it danced in your heart Start shackled, a pony show to start Always heckled, danger to the part Inside freckled, riddled with bad art Unleashed, cackled, daggers to your heart Freedom, tackled, killed you with mine

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/4/2011 10:40:00 AM

Intriguing poem, Tim. Energy can be both good and bad. When someone uses it to hurt you, the "daggers to your heart" can be painful, at times even lethal. Thanks for stopping by Tim. Enjoyed reading your poem. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2011 3:33:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your excellent work this afternoon..A very interesting poem..We can kill another's freedom if we use our freedom irresponsibly...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara