Beautiful Scars Poet Tanka

Puppy Wisdom: Syllables of Wisdom 3 Contest

Puppy Wisdom: Syllables Of Wisdom 3 Contest
Sponsor: Silent One

An average dog
sweeter-average human
loyal to a fault
puppy's lives are way too short
loves more than you love yourself

Date Written: January 17, 2016

Poetry Form: Tanka
Syllable Count: 5-7-5-7-7

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2016 at 7:25 PM loving this one again, Laura Loo. Congrats to YOU.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 4:38 AM Congrats on ur very wise winning write Laura! Great tanka!

Casarah Nance January 19, 2016 at 5:00 PM The photos are too cute, I bet they are cozy cuddlers! This is puppy love, an aww write that brought a smile to my face ;) Beautiful Scars January 19, 2016 at 5:43 PM Thank you Casarah, yes they are my precious baby boys *love* (I also have a white fluffy bunny who stole my heart) A big a zoo lol

CayCay Godwin January 17, 2016 at 6:37 PM Creative one, Laura - all the best ... CayCay Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 8:38 PM Many thanks lovely CayCay :) Have a great night :)

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2016 at 6:19 PM this is so sweet. I LOVE my doggie too!! Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 8:37 PM Yay! I love my fur-babies!! I also have a white fluffy bunny that hops around the house all day lol *smiles*

Jan Allison January 17, 2016 at 2:30 PM aww what wonderful images LuLoo and you are so lucky to have such wonderful loyal pets:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 3:02 PM Thank you Jan:) *smiles* *hugs*-luloo