Puppy Love Vs True Love

Puppy Love vs True Love

                                  Lots of pretty puppy love
                           start just on adolescence.
                                Sweet and sour memories.
                          Intermittent occurrence.

                                  Those exciting evening stars
                            sparkling and flickering
                                     rise, pass by, fade quickly,
                            momentary glistening.

                                 True love looks like dazzling Sun
                            wonderful strong steady glow
                                  entwined in joy and grief
                            continuous pearly flow.

                                  Perfect love offers shelter
                            being cool calm and quiet,
                                 yet bubbling blood brings flood,
                          romantic and passionate.  
                                
  03/29/17
               Puppy Love Vs.True Love Contest by Eve Roper
 
     Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Chansarkar Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Its beautiful Aneesha!
Roper Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love the steps of love you penned. May you have Blessed weekend… ~*
Fraser Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 2:03 PM
I love the "momentary glistening" vs "dazzling-steady-flow" Beautiful write Anisha
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace