Puppy Love

Philter puppy love 
when rain drops on
Sweating hot body 
in dreaming Zone

Costing null feed
rocks strike silent groan
rebuff brings tornado
for hasty results

pleasing diets
make it rough
wearing Diamond
crazy aircraft, Philter puppy love....



Contest for 12 lines poem 
sponsored by : Brian Strand
Written by: bldevnath
on 30th August 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/9/2011 11:39:00 PM

Sounds like something interesting is going on here! A bit of passion I think.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2011 10:55:00 AM

wow I surely luv these lines bl.. the first stanza so powerful my friend and the emotional content ..the ending ..superbly crafted luv.. thankxx for enjoy my UNCONDITIONAL... my faith is very precious to me...

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 12:10:00 PM

You have absolutely said that Your faith is very precious to you and that must be. I too believe that. Thanks for comment on my poem. bl

Judy Ball

Date: 9/1/2011 2:26:00 PM

Hmmmmm An interesting wwrite my friend. Just not sure my poor little mind can fathom it. God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 10:45:00 AM

Many thanks for your sweet comment. God bless us all. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 1:42:00 PM

It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry BL. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for your very nice comment. God bless us all. bl