Puppy Love

Philter puppy love when rain drops on Sweating hot body in dreaming Zone Costing null feed rocks strike silent groan rebuff brings tornado for hasty results pleasing diets make it rough wearing Diamond crazy aircraft, Philter puppy love.... Contest for 12 lines poem sponsored by : Brian Strand Written by: bldevnath on 30th August 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/9/2011 11:39:00 PM

Sounds like something interesting is going on here! A bit of passion I think.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2011 10:55:00 AM

wow I surely luv these lines bl.. the first stanza so powerful my friend and the emotional content ..the ending ..superbly crafted luv.. thankxx for enjoy my UNCONDITIONAL... my faith is very precious to me...

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 12:10:00 PM

You have absolutely said that Your faith is very precious to you and that must be. I too believe that. Thanks for comment on my poem. bl

Judy Ball

Date: 9/1/2011 2:26:00 PM

Hmmmmm An interesting wwrite my friend. Just not sure my poor little mind can fathom it. God Bless, JB

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 10:45:00 AM

Many thanks for your sweet comment. God bless us all. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 1:42:00 PM

It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry BL. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2011 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for your very nice comment. God bless us all. bl