Puppies

Puppies Wintry mornings greet Waggy tails and little paws My old toes are warm

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Ruben. Love, Carol

Ruben Ramos
Date: 7/29/2012 1:35:00 PM

HI Carol. I've been away for quite some time. Puppies keep greeting me but I'm not sure about the contest. This is something new to me. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2011 9:23:00 AM

Lol, I got six puppies..and I think it's funny when they nibble at my toes...thank you for the image.. Have yourself a lovely Sunday, take care, ;-),.. P.d.

Ruben Ramos
Date: 11/15/2011 4:53:00 AM

Thanks P.D.. Its wonderfully satisfying returning to the "pen in hand" after so many years away from writing. Haiku seems to agree with me. Ruben