Puppies

I watch him waken from his nap.
Stretching, rolling, finally standing. 
He looks about, searching for his newest challenge.
The little tail in constant animation. 
The stubby legs running, stumbling, chasing all that moves. 
A brief pause to sample flora, tugging on a stubborn weed.
Youthful bravado on display. 
Chewing on a broken stick, carried around for all to admire. 
Off again with his unsure gait to seek another treasure. 
I pick him up and reap the bounty of  a soft wet tongue on my cheek,
while he wiggles to once again be free.  
On he goes, sniffing, tasting, finding life in all he sees. 
And finally, when all his dragons have been slain
and imagined foes subdued, he returns.
With heavy eyes and weary legs,
lays his head upon my foot and dreams his puppy dreams.


This is a favorite poem for a couple of reasons. Partly because it is the second poem I ever wrote, and partly because I have loved dogs since I was a child and have had many canine friends over the years.  But in my heart, I cherish the puppy, fresh to our world, on a journey of discovery, innocent and so curious. I tried to capture that here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 28, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Dear Bob, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Bob. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 1:22 AM
Thank u Bob for your congrats... had u not told me i would not have noticed that the note about why it is my fav is missing..it was a mistake on my part..now i've added it at the end of the piece..thnx ..i have enjoyed your write on puppies..pls accept my congrats for your win
Quigley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 10:05 AM
It didn't take anything away from your poem. Thanks for your positive comments
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Congrats Bob on an amazing win with this favorite poem so awesome luv...
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September 21, 2011 at 12:16 AM
Appreciate the kudos Linda-Marie
B Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 5:47 PM
You captured that very well Bob, well done and congratulations on your win. Endearing poetry.
Quigley Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 12:16 AM
Thanks very much
Poesy Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 2:10 PM
To me puppies are poetic pets. It is great that your glorious poem imbues a trace of this. Thank you for your complements. Congratulations too.
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 3:52 PM
My thanks to you
M V Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your big win,Bob! A wonderful write on dog.
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Many thanks
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Bob
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Thanks Dr Ram
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