Pupil

how do you play so lovely
you play it with your shoulders and you play it with your hips
why am I shaking so when I play with you
you’re cold and you’re wet
no … yes
let's try again silly, this is your spot, now start counting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 24, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Ralph, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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September 21, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Nice and clever
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September 21, 2012 at 4:52 AM
Thank you for sharing your writing with us Ralph. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2012 at 8:11 PM
An interesting one. it reminds me of the cool song called Don't Stand so CLose to Me.
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