P'Ungnyu

Wind and Flow Dancing with the wind Twisting, turning, moving Spirit of the wind flowing Wind chimes played the tune Giving her the beat Encouraging lightness of feet

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John Freeman

Date: 10/9/2009 12:30:00 PM

Dancing with the wind in the spirit would have to be dancing all in the same spirit(I Cor. 12:13)that is wind, and everything in the same spirit dancing. Talk about a hyper-synchronicity going here, Sara. You have it going on here in the perfection of itself. Smile. Thanks for your comments today. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 9:55:00 AM

And what a tune it is dear.... Exquisite write Sara.....:JP]

Isa Mahrie

Date: 10/8/2009 9:10:00 AM

:)seems a cheer poem nice ... i would like to leanr about poetry more .... can this side add friends ..... gr8 read

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 6:49:00 AM

were you dancing in your jammys? again?:) I felt real good this am but it has gone down hill since.