P'Ungnyu

Wind and Flow

Dancing with the wind
Twisting, turning, moving
Spirit of the wind flowing
Wind chimes played the tune
Giving her the beat
Encouraging lightness of feet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Dancing with the wind in the spirit would have to be dancing all in the same spirit(I Cor. 12:13)that is wind, and everything in the same spirit dancing. Talk about a hyper-synchronicity going here, Sara. You have it going on here in the perfection of itself. Smile. Thanks for your comments today. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 9:55 AM
And what a tune it is dear.... Exquisite write Sara.....:JP]
Mahrie Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 9:10 AM
:)seems a cheer poem nice ... i would like to leanr about poetry more .... can this side add friends ..... gr8 read
Culverhouse Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 6:49 AM
were you dancing in your jammys? again?:) I felt real good this am but it has gone down hill since.
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