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10/10/23

A Hi Poo Senryu

First Place

Ccontest by. John Lawless

Pungent



          hubby in land phone,
                        pungent smell of betrayal :
                                                      me picked extension.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Good one, Anish. Congrats
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 11:45 PM
OMgosh, Anisha! Interesting, and my compliments on your ably earned 1st placement in John's contest! Honorable tribute, my friend! Aloha, William
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Ha - good one Anisha! Congratulations! :)
Miller Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Great take on the contest, congratulations
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:56 AM
eek the mucky stuff sure would fly Anisha! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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