Punched In Face By Fist In Face (High Critique Face Punched Version)

errrr strings burst from sirens
lights strobe in our ears blinding us
i can hardly listen to speaking mumbles
a heavy bass resonates between us
down another drink upside down
countdown to rundown

ooppps punched in face by fist in face
blood falls out of face that has been punched by fist
blood from face falls on floor fist removes from face
placed down by bodies side
unclenches

screaming idiots covered in plasma
laugh silently
punch angrily
die readily

night ends on sticky floors
fight ends before it began
light comes on
get out get out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 5:58 PM
strange sort of for me, but who am I?
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