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Pumpkin Pie

PUMPKIN PIE aphrodisiacal arousal, her husband lifts from his chair seasonal cologne wafts out from the kitchen space most dangerous, placed, in an outside window a husband keeps vigil next to the warmth of the pie no one will steal his slice, he holds the knife 10/4/2017

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Date: 10/24/2017 10:13:00 AM
Very nicely written, Kim. My first impression was that you were talking about his wife and from your comments below, perhaps I was right. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 10:34:00 AM
Right you are, John! Thanks!
Date: 10/4/2017 5:45:00 PM
oh, I love that last line. I can just picture him there as if ready to plunge at it with his knife!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. It is also meant to hint that no one could steal his wife :) ;)
Date: 10/4/2017 8:26:00 AM
A joy to read--a smile and a laugh at the end!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2017 8:27:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed!

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