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Pulse Points

PULSE POINTS

He penetrated my eyes
Speaking of scented petals
As he touched my pulse points
On my wrists, behind my ears
I closed my eyes
He speaks in whispers
Breathing life into my thoughts
Enrapturing my wits
My heart beats from within my head
A steady drum of falling in love
Over and over again
Plunging into my years of marriage
I'm a naked soul
before my husband's
Wandering eyes

Kim Rodrigues (c) 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Andresen Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 2:51 AM
- True love ... what is more beautiful :) - A lovely poem, Kim - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:20 PM
wow, this is REALLY nice, Kim. I loved reading this one today.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
Green Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:41 PM
What a beautiful and heart warming poem of love between a husband and wife. I loved this Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! :)
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