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PULSE POINTS He penetrated my eyes Speaking of scented petals As he touched my pulse points On my wrists, behind my ears I closed my eyes He speaks in whispers Breathing life into my thoughts Enrapturing my wits My heart beats from within my head A steady drum of falling in love Over and over again Plunging into my years of marriage I'm a naked soul before my husband's Wandering eyes Kim Rodrigues (c) 2017

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Date: 3/3/2017 2:51:00 AM
- True love ... what is more beautiful :) - A lovely poem, Kim - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/3/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/2/2017 7:20:00 PM
wow, this is REALLY nice, Kim. I loved reading this one today.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2017 7:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
Date: 3/2/2017 5:41:00 PM
What a beautiful and heart warming poem of love between a husband and wife. I loved this Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/2/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! :)

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