Pulse of Life

pulsating vibes hum
emanating life's essence
fluid energy
immersed within all beings
ebbs and flows through each other


TLH  ©  10-17-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:49 PM
I love that line "fluid energy" , so flowing it is!
Kamal Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Very deep, I dont know why I remembered the movie Avatar when I read it... Love,Omneya
Onclaud Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 12:01 PM
wonderful in form, tanya and deeply written as well... imaginative turn!..:) huggs
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 7:52 AM
It has been awhile since I have been able to sit and read. I am so happy to read and comment on the the many outstanding poems written by the amazing poets here at PoetrySoup today. Glad you have shared your writing with us Tanya. Love, Carol
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October 17, 2012 at 6:18 PM
Great piece of poetry. Very enjoyed. Michael
Sivey Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 4:03 PM
This is a fully dynamic write my friend, I love every word of this poem! What a delightful piece you have written here Tanya! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write this evening! What an incredible piece, Great Work!!
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October 17, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Very unique work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..We all have that fluid energy but some have more and more energetic than others....Thanks for stopping by my blog..I sent Jack a list of all the names that have commented..Sara
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