Pulse of Life

pulsating vibes hum
emanating life's essence
fluid energy
immersed within all beings
ebbs and flows through each other


TLH  ©  10-17-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/18/2012 2:49:00 PM
I love that line "fluid energy" , so flowing it is!
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Date: 10/18/2012 1:15:00 PM
Very deep, I dont know why I remembered the movie Avatar when I read it... Love,Omneya
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Date: 10/18/2012 12:01:00 PM
wonderful in form, tanya and deeply written as well... imaginative turn!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/18/2012 7:52:00 AM
It has been awhile since I have been able to sit and read. I am so happy to read and comment on the the many outstanding poems written by the amazing poets here at PoetrySoup today. Glad you have shared your writing with us Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2012 6:18:00 PM
Great piece of poetry. Very enjoyed. Michael
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Date: 10/17/2012 4:03:00 PM
This is a fully dynamic write my friend, I love every word of this poem! What a delightful piece you have written here Tanya! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write this evening! What an incredible piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/17/2012 2:08:00 PM
Very unique work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..We all have that fluid energy but some have more and more energetic than others....Thanks for stopping by my blog..I sent Jack a list of all the names that have commented..Sara
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