Kim Rodrigues Poet Quatrain

Pulsating Sigh

his excited bright eyes, his laughter,
the puckish way he draws me in.
the moonspun prize he sought after —
roses, champagne, candlelight…he wins.

dawn in afterglow, birdsong on breeze, 
silent shadows billowing…lovers drowning in
two cups of coffee…bright-zanthous trees
in morning sun, yawning leaves, bare skin.

salutations of solitude cleaving,
breath to breath, before unbridling the door.
perch of our souls, pulsating sigh, weaving
its ebb and flow climax to the shore.

7/10/2021
What Makes You Sigh
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Laura Leiser September 6, 2021 at 1:38 PM Gorgeous imagery, and so romantic! Congratulations on your well deserved top win, Kim! :) Kim Rodrigues September 6, 2021 at 5:11 PM Thank you, Laura! :)

Frances Schiavina July 21, 2021 at 8:37 AM Superlative! Sincerest congratulations on well deserved gold win. Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2021 at 8:55 AM Thank you, Frances! :)

Aniruddha Pathak July 20, 2021 at 10:24 AM What a beautiful creation! A deserving big win, congrats Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2021 at 5:09 AM Thank you so much, Aniruddha!

Vijay Pandit July 18, 2021 at 6:56 AM BIG congrats Kim on your trophy win. Truly a masterpiece you created. Much enjoyed! Kim Rodrigues July 18, 2021 at 10:56 AM From the master poet, I so appreciate your comment!

Brian Sambourne July 17, 2021 at 7:12 AM A beauty, and a true top winner! Congratulations, Kim. Cheers, Brian Kim Rodrigues July 18, 2021 at 10:56 AM Thank you, Brian!

Laura Leiser July 15, 2021 at 2:34 PM Gorgeous poetry, Kim! Congrats on your top win! Well deserved! :) Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:07 PM Thanks so much, Laura!

Paula Goldsmith July 15, 2021 at 9:27 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............. Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:07 PM Thank you, dear lady!

Daisy Ward July 15, 2021 at 8:37 AM CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN. SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM. Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:07 PM Thank you, Daisy!

Subimal Sinha-Roy July 15, 2021 at 5:49 AM Sigh pulsates when romance vibrates. Beautiful rhythmic flow. Congratulations, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Subimal!

Terry Miller July 15, 2021 at 1:23 AM Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:38 AM Thank you, Terry!

Victor Buhagiar July 15, 2021 at 12:46 AM Congratulations on your big win. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:36 AM Thank you so much, dear friend! Hugs!

Anisha Dutta July 14, 2021 at 9:35 PM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 3:36 AM Thanks so much, Anisha!

Beata Agustin July 14, 2021 at 6:42 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 7:14 PM God bless you too, Beata! Thanks!

Line Gauthier July 14, 2021 at 12:42 PM Congrats on your top win, Kim. A joy to read ~ Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thank you, sweet lady!

Regina Mcintosh July 14, 2021 at 11:45 AM Congratulations on your breathless, breathtaking poem. God bless you always, Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 12:49 PM God bless you too, Regina! Thank you!

Rama Balasubramanian July 14, 2021 at 10:55 AM Congratulations Kim Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Rama!

Marilene Evans July 14, 2021 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your top win. So lovely.

Sotto Poet July 14, 2021 at 10:11 AM Congratulations on your contest win with this so beautiful poem. Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 12:49 PM Thank you, Lasaad!

Christuraj Alex July 14, 2021 at 9:44 AM weaving its ebb and flow climax to the shore. Beautifully penned. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 9:50 AM Thank you, dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2021 at 11:36 PM Ahh This one leaves me breathless, waiting for the next poem you write about what makes you sigh, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 4:51 AM Oh, thanks so much! :)

Victor Buhagiar July 10, 2021 at 11:10 PM Excitingly romantic. Loved it. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2021 at 4:52 AM Thank you, Victor! :)

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2021 at 8:55 PM Quite a hefty sigh there, Poet. Love the sensuality in this quatrain, Kim. :) gw Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2021 at 9:32 PM Thank you, Gershon! :)

Tom Cunningham July 10, 2021 at 12:32 PM A romantic verse with sighs of satisfaction. Good luck in the contest and hope your weekend is going well. Tom Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2021 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Tom! Happy Weekend to you, dear friend!

Rama Balasubramanian July 10, 2021 at 10:51 AM Great imagery and emotions. This is so well done. All the best for contest Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2021 at 6:11 PM Thank you, Rama!