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Pulsating Sigh

his excited bright eyes, his laughter,
the puckish way he draws me in.
the moonspun prize he sought after —
roses, champagne, candlelight…he wins.

dawn in afterglow, birdsong on breeze, 
silent shadows billowing…lovers drowning in
two cups of coffee…bright-zanthous trees
in morning sun, yawning leaves, bare skin.

salutations of solitude cleaving,
breath to breath, before unbridling the door.
perch of our souls, pulsating sigh, weaving
its ebb and flow climax to the shore.

7/10/2021
What Makes You Sigh
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Laura Leiser Date: 9/6/2021 1:38:00 PM Gorgeous imagery, and so romantic! Congratulations on your well deserved top win, Kim! :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/6/2021 5:11:00 PM Thank you, Laura! :)

Frances Schiavina Date: 7/21/2021 8:37:00 AM Superlative! Sincerest congratulations on well deserved gold win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/21/2021 8:55:00 AM Thank you, Frances! :)

Aniruddha Pathak Date: 7/20/2021 10:24:00 AM What a beautiful creation! A deserving big win, congrats Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/21/2021 5:09:00 AM Thank you so much, Aniruddha!

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/18/2021 6:56:00 AM BIG congrats Kim on your trophy win. Truly a masterpiece you created. Much enjoyed! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/18/2021 10:56:00 AM From the master poet, I so appreciate your comment!

Brian Sambourne Date: 7/17/2021 7:12:00 AM A beauty, and a true top winner! Congratulations, Kim. Cheers, Brian Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/18/2021 10:56:00 AM Thank you, Brian!

Laura Leiser Date: 7/15/2021 2:34:00 PM Gorgeous poetry, Kim! Congrats on your top win! Well deserved! :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM Thanks so much, Laura!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/15/2021 9:27:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings.............. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM Thank you, dear lady!

Daisy Ward Date: 7/15/2021 8:37:00 AM CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN. SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM Thank you, Daisy!

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 7/15/2021 5:49:00 AM Sigh pulsates when romance vibrates. Beautiful rhythmic flow. Congratulations, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:06:00 PM Thank you, Subimal!

Terry Miller Date: 7/15/2021 1:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:38:00 AM Thank you, Terry!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/15/2021 12:46:00 AM Congratulations on your big win. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:36:00 AM Thank you so much, dear friend! Hugs!

Anisha Dutta Date: 7/14/2021 9:35:00 PM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2021 3:36:00 AM Thanks so much, Anisha!

Beata Agustin Date: 7/14/2021 6:42:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 7:14:00 PM God bless you too, Beata! Thanks!

Line Gauthier Date: 7/14/2021 12:42:00 PM Congrats on your top win, Kim. A joy to read ~ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 12:50:00 PM Thank you, sweet lady!

Regina Mcintosh Date: 7/14/2021 11:45:00 AM Congratulations on your breathless, breathtaking poem. God bless you always, Love, Gina Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 12:49:00 PM God bless you too, Regina! Thank you!

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/14/2021 10:55:00 AM Congratulations Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 12:50:00 PM Thank you, Rama!

Marilene Evans Date: 7/14/2021 10:51:00 AM Congratulations on your top win. So lovely. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 7/14/2021 10:11:00 AM Congratulations on your contest win with this so beautiful poem. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 12:49:00 PM Thank you, Lasaad!

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/14/2021 9:44:00 AM weaving its ebb and flow climax to the shore. Beautifully penned. Congratulations! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 9:50:00 AM Thank you, dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/13/2021 11:36:00 PM Ahh This one leaves me breathless, waiting for the next poem you write about what makes you sigh, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 4:51:00 AM Oh, thanks so much! :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/10/2021 11:10:00 PM Excitingly romantic. Loved it. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2021 4:52:00 AM Thank you, Victor! :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/10/2021 8:55:00 PM Quite a hefty sigh there, Poet. Love the sensuality in this quatrain, Kim. :) gw Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/10/2021 9:32:00 PM Thank you, Gershon! :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/10/2021 12:32:00 PM A romantic verse with sighs of satisfaction. Good luck in the contest and hope your weekend is going well. Tom Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/10/2021 6:11:00 PM Thank you, Tom! Happy Weekend to you, dear friend!

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 7/10/2021 10:51:00 AM Great imagery and emotions. This is so well done. All the best for contest Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/10/2021 6:11:00 PM Thank you, Rama!