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Pulsating Sigh

his excited bright eyes, his laughter, the puckish way he draws me in. the moonspun prize he sought after — roses, champagne, candlelight…he wins. dawn in afterglow, birdsong on breeze, silent shadows billowing…lovers drowning in two cups of coffee…bright-zanthous trees in morning sun, yawning leaves, bare skin. salutations of solitude cleaving, breath to breath, before unbridling the door. perch of our souls, pulsating sigh, weaving its ebb and flow climax to the shore. 7/10/2021 What Makes You Sigh Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Laura Leiser

Date: 9/6/2021 1:38:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, and so romantic! Congratulations on your well deserved top win, Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2021 5:11:00 PM

Thank you, Laura! :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 7/21/2021 8:37:00 AM

Superlative! Sincerest congratulations on well deserved gold win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thank you, Frances! :)

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/20/2021 10:24:00 AM

What a beautiful creation! A deserving big win, congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2021 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Aniruddha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/18/2021 6:56:00 AM

BIG congrats Kim on your trophy win. Truly a masterpiece you created. Much enjoyed!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:56:00 AM

From the master poet, I so appreciate your comment!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/17/2021 7:12:00 AM

A beauty, and a true top winner! Congratulations, Kim. Cheers, Brian

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 10:56:00 AM

Thank you, Brian!

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/15/2021 2:34:00 PM

Gorgeous poetry, Kim! Congrats on your top win! Well deserved! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thanks so much, Laura!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2021 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thank you, dear lady!

Daisy Ward

Date: 7/15/2021 8:37:00 AM

CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN. SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thank you, Daisy!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/15/2021 5:49:00 AM

Sigh pulsates when romance vibrates. Beautiful rhythmic flow. Congratulations, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Subimal!

Terry Miller

Date: 7/15/2021 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:38:00 AM

Thank you, Terry!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/15/2021 12:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear friend! Hugs!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/14/2021 9:35:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2021 3:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anisha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/14/2021 6:42:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 7:14:00 PM

God bless you too, Beata! Thanks!

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/14/2021 12:42:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Kim. A joy to read ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, sweet lady!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/14/2021 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your breathless, breathtaking poem. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 12:49:00 PM

God bless you too, Regina! Thank you!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/14/2021 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Rama!

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/14/2021 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win. So lovely.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/14/2021 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest win with this so beautiful poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 12:49:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/14/2021 9:44:00 AM

weaving its ebb and flow climax to the shore. Beautifully penned. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 9:50:00 AM

Thank you, dear poet!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2021 11:36:00 PM

Ahh This one leaves me breathless, waiting for the next poem you write about what makes you sigh, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 4:51:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/10/2021 11:10:00 PM

Excitingly romantic. Loved it. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 4:52:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2021 8:55:00 PM

Quite a hefty sigh there, Poet. Love the sensuality in this quatrain, Kim. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2021 9:32:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/10/2021 12:32:00 PM

A romantic verse with sighs of satisfaction. Good luck in the contest and hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Tom! Happy Weekend to you, dear friend!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/10/2021 10:51:00 AM

Great imagery and emotions. This is so well done. All the best for contest

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Rama!