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Pullazma

a needle is peirced in my skin and now the extraction begins their movite in truth is keeping the juice returning the bloodcells again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 11:02:00 AM
Is this a limerick about plasmapherisis?(Sp?) If so, it is very nice. Check the spelling for "motive" -- you have reversed the v and t. Good work.
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