Pullazma

a needle is peirced in my skin
and now the extraction begins
their movite in truth
is keeping the juice
returning the bloodcells again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Amadore Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Is this a limerick about plasmapherisis?(Sp?) If so, it is very nice. Check the spelling for "motive" -- you have reversed the v and t. Good work.
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