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we live in an angelic world made by numbers all that i know that its made by nature stones fall and trees grow day by day we all grow together all along we live in a beautiful world we all rejoice together and bound together like leafs on a tree just like how they fall and die we can all do it some how we all have some one to lean on close our eyes and get lost in motion transition between man and nature we can all pull though sea is spinning around the world the rain comes and goes every time you see the snow comes a white light in our eyes we all grow with cakes and candles the old faces fade and so do the new but we all live in a beautiful world the sun rises every morning for some others have there backs turn but wats ever happed to our souls its happened to someone else so dont look back and grow old burn your anger not your soul just think that your still have this beautiful world were the sun will always smile in the morning at you every time i look around i see beautiful long green grass gliding objects all over my head and me and you together i know we can all live together as the light touches our hands we think of future plans so make me unstopperble

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Date: 11/21/2009 2:26:00 PM
become unstoppable. great poem. congrats
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest! I really like the flow of your poem.
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning poem, Jason! Well done!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:39:00 AM
Interesting views on the world and life. Like our style. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed this write. Well done.
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Date: 10/26/2009 10:09:00 AM
Thought provoking poem, Jason! Good write. I enjoyed this one! Keep writing! Peace, Ladybug12
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:25:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem.welcome to poetry soup--Charma:)
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Date: 10/25/2009 1:58:00 PM
Very inspirational. What a rich morning I have had reading great poetry. I like the way you see things. That's tight. :) Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comment on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:16:00 PM
smile, this poem is amazing and beautiful as well as nature always inhances anything it touches. enjoyed reading it and have a good day.
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Date: 1/12/2009 4:00:00 PM
amazing
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