Pull And Push

I empty my treasure caskets.
Allured by Renunciation
Pearls and gems yet fill my baskets.
I gather each new temptation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Evangeline Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:51 PM
So succinct, yet full of meaning! Congrats
Swan Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 2:28 PM
The bane of recycling and minimalism: treasure hunting! This made me smile. J :)
Alex Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
mysore Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 3:30 AM
hmm, interesting it is. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers
Alex Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Read Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 4:46 AM
A treasure chest filled with memories.
Alex Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank You Very Much. May God Bless You!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:50 AM
You have a choice whether to give worldly objects importance or revert to spiritual thoughts.
Alex Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank You Very Much. May God Bless You!
Beaufort Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 2:22 AM
Christuraj, a very interesting poem about life. "Casket" has more than one meaning and I tried to think about this referring to wealth or as memories of those that came before. You created something thought provoking in just a few words...impressive. Smiles
Alex Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Thank You Very Much. May God Bless You!
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