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Puffs of Moisture

Divine formations,
Mass of water particles;
Reflecting all light.

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David Smalling

Date: 6/4/2009 10:32:00 PM

You are indeed a master of the haiku ... what wonderful power you bring to it.

Shiki Remindio

Date: 5/26/2009 4:59:00 PM

I love Haiku's. Wow. And your concrete poems are wonderful. Mine turn into blobs. Thank you. I really did improve(?)

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 7:52:00 AM

Your chiseling beauty out of morning stones ... pure ivory to become.

Jessica K

Date: 5/25/2009 8:01:00 AM

Another well descripted poem.....a pleasure to read your poems -Jessica

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/24/2009 7:59:00 PM

Should I look up high into the lambs or all the way down onto my toes? Great one joojojo I love minimalist poetry, it says too much withing microscopic organisms @.@ thanks!!!

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/24/2009 12:11:00 PM

Speechless, I can't describe how wonderful this poem is. The way you just described a cloud. Nice Work. Love Elizabeth

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/24/2009 11:48:00 AM

This haiku just makes a lot of sense.. this is well done.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/24/2009 11:46:00 AM

wonderful Raul, we see Gods beauty everywhere if we seek we find, his light always shines in all your poetry, God bless you from diane

James Fraser

Date: 5/24/2009 10:56:00 AM

Another clasic Haiku from the King, reading yours Raul has given me the inspiration to attempt them, if they turn out ok, its down to you, Thank you, James

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/24/2009 10:46:00 AM

Awesome description Raul! Your talented pen creates another lovely Haiku!