Puff Puff

My mind hushed of its crowd of thoughts
The pains ive felt slowly strip away
Anger replaced with a numbing flay
Vision blurred with a cloud of smoke
Sailing me to the land of hope
Worries washed away
For now this is how I will spend my day
Spralled out on the couch,
Joint in my mouth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 12, 2016 at 11:40 PM
CASSIDY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
O'Neal Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Haha.. I love this, Great write. smoke one for me, O- wait I got that covered. Lol Anyway keep writing.
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