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My mind hushed of its crowd of thoughts The pains ive felt slowly strip away Anger replaced with a numbing flay Vision blurred with a cloud of smoke Sailing me to the land of hope Worries washed away For now this is how I will spend my day Spralled out on the couch, Joint in my mouth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2024 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:40:00 PM
CASSIDY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/8/2011 1:01:00 PM
Haha.. I love this, Great write. smoke one for me, O- wait I got that covered. Lol Anyway keep writing.
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