Puddles On Sidewalk

Puddles on sidewalk

for children to have fun with

as rain falls on them.

Written 5-24-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Song Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 6:40 PM
Childlike images are soooooo relaxing....even with the giggles that emerge from the activities. Wonderful fun here, James. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 9:45 PM
this is very cute, James. Have a lovely memorial weekend.
Mac Donald Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 5:33 PM
A fun write, James...can see those children splashing in the puddles! Surely brings back fond memories..thank you! Wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
Fraser Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Yep, I was one of the children you write about here James. Lovely Haiku my friend. On another note relating to Sidewalks. Check out the Queen track http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJgqp0dz3po It's called 'Sleeping on the Soudwalk' terrific track - I'm sure you'll like it. Have a lovely weekend.....:)
Hunt Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Glad to see more from you, my friend. Another gem I see:)
Horne Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 2:40 PM
Lovely haiku, James - I love the rain : )
Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today...I can see the scene...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Another lovely haiku on the season creating pleasant visual, James
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